.........towards the stream of thoughts

Thursday, August 16, 2012

Angels hear..

Angels roaming in the heaven far and far from my sight
Let me relate my darkest plight ;I am lost in my fate badly woven
Can you let me out from this and let me fly free in my dreams
Do you hear how I weep and stay awake in dark nights
Or are you just pretending that you hear though you really dont?
From these dreams I can't get rid irritating me in every breath
Memories haunt as ghost in my mind and suffocate coming behind
Once upon a time I had a blissfull time, for now its gone ruined
I have become a slave of past with this bond I can not detach
scattered wishes with thousand sobbs remain  me a lifetime hurt
But still my soul is crystal clear with not even a speck of dirt
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18 comments:

  1. agastiAugust 16, 2012 at 11:55 PM

    විශීෂ්ඨයි :)

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  2. UnknownAugust 17, 2012 at 12:10 AM

    I read it several times. U r very talented..

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  3. නාඩියා නාඩිරත්නAugust 17, 2012 at 1:43 AM

    Great aah!!! :)
    I got a flashback of "Damayanthi" when seeing the photo! ;)

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    1. dharaneeAugust 17, 2012 at 1:56 AM

      thanks but dont gamble like NALA, haritha :P

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  4. UnknownAugust 17, 2012 at 1:57 AM

    O: great ...Girl seems to be talking much about sad past memories ....you've related it in a great way that we also feel sad .. Nice verse :)

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  5. ABHISHEK AGRAWALAugust 17, 2012 at 2:59 AM

    All d best

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  6. PrashantAugust 17, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    you just give words to ur feelings.

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  7. ABHI CONTENT WRITERAugust 17, 2012 at 11:46 PM

    awesome just loved it

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  8. Parikshit RaneAugust 18, 2012 at 12:09 AM

    well written straight from your heart
    -:)
    keep wriitng!

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  9. AnonymousAugust 18, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    why u wrote this , but realy fantastistic

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  10. AnonymousAugust 18, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    very nice, great work :)

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  11. UnknownAugust 18, 2012 at 6:51 AM

    I must say such a great work, keep it up :)

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  12. nostalgicpen.blogspot.comAugust 18, 2012 at 11:47 PM

    awesome the poem is lovely..<3 <3 <3 ..It is much emotional...:'( Anyway i love these kinds of poems..every line is written with a much toughtful mind...
    I have become a slave of my past with the bond i cant detach..i can relate so easily..ND also ending seems to be optimistic..:)

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  13. Red Riding HoodAugust 19, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    it's wonderful Dhara...

    don't be a slave of past..
    be the master of future.. :D

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  14. Vishal AnandAugust 20, 2012 at 4:44 AM

    Still, a long way to go ma'am.. :)

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  15. UnknownAugust 20, 2012 at 5:10 AM

    wonderful... :)

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