Let me relate my darkest plight ;I am lost in my fate badly woven
Can you let me out from this and let me fly free in my dreams
Do you hear how I weep and stay awake in dark nights
Or are you just pretending that you hear though you really dont?
From these dreams I can't get rid irritating me in every breath
Memories haunt as ghost in my mind and suffocate coming behind
Once upon a time I had a blissfull time, for now its gone ruined
I have become a slave of past with this bond I can not detach
scattered wishes with thousand sobbs remain me a lifetime hurt
But still my soul is crystal clear with not even a speck of dirt
විශීෂ්ඨයි :)
ReplyDeleteI read it several times. U r very talented..
ReplyDeletethanks :)
DeleteGreat aah!!! :)
ReplyDeleteI got a flashback of "Damayanthi" when seeing the photo! ;)
thanks but dont gamble like NALA, haritha :P
DeleteO: great ...Girl seems to be talking much about sad past memories ....you've related it in a great way that we also feel sad .. Nice verse :)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Anushi
DeleteAll d best
ReplyDeleteyou just give words to ur feelings.
ReplyDeleteawesome just loved it
ReplyDeletewell written straight from your heart
ReplyDelete-:)
keep wriitng!
why u wrote this , but realy fantastistic
ReplyDeletevery nice, great work :)
ReplyDeleteI must say such a great work, keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteawesome the poem is lovely..<3 <3 <3 ..It is much emotional...:'( Anyway i love these kinds of poems..every line is written with a much toughtful mind...
ReplyDeleteI have become a slave of my past with the bond i cant detach..i can relate so easily..ND also ending seems to be optimistic..:)
it's wonderful Dhara...
ReplyDeletedon't be a slave of past..
be the master of future.. :D
Still, a long way to go ma'am.. :)
ReplyDeletewonderful... :)
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